Very good work. The story is coherent, the characters are expressive, the pauses are nice, other than the sound effects and what's left of clean-up, you seem good to go. If I were to change anything, to match the nostalgic feeling of the music I would maybe mute the color scheme a little like a cartoon from the 1930s.
I could see how much you improved since that love story one of last semester, and you are amazing! nice story and lovely characters! make connection and interaction with audiences. add more sound effects[?] like wings flapping, pumpkin explosion, Scarecrow rupturing, etc. I cant wait to see the finish one!!! nice job!
Amazing!! one thing is that I couldn't see the smile well of the sparrow when it hands over the flower. It's an adorable moment, and I know you've already chosen all the color palettes but maybe give a little bit of highlight(on the beak?) so we can see the smile well? Also it has so may nice facial expressions I don't want to miss! Anyway keep on going! This is wonderful work!!
looks really really nice. just edit some of the missing limbs and backgrounds and you should be good.
ReplyDeleteVery good work. The story is coherent, the characters are expressive, the pauses are nice, other than the sound effects and what's left of clean-up, you seem good to go.
ReplyDeleteIf I were to change anything, to match the nostalgic feeling of the music I would maybe mute the color scheme a little like a cartoon from the 1930s.
I could see how much you improved since that love story one of last semester, and you are amazing!
ReplyDeletenice story and lovely characters! make connection and interaction with audiences.
add more sound effects[?] like wings flapping, pumpkin explosion, Scarecrow rupturing, etc.
I cant wait to see the finish one!!! nice job!
Amazing!! one thing is that I couldn't see the smile well of the sparrow when it hands over the flower. It's an adorable moment, and I know you've already chosen all the color palettes but maybe give a little bit of highlight(on the beak?) so we can see the smile well? Also it has so may nice facial expressions I don't want to miss! Anyway keep on going! This is wonderful work!!
ReplyDeleteHope you get a chance to read all this reflective feedback!
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